Good stuff, [@Zarkun]. Ren is an intersting character, with a detailed childhood that explains his motivation in the galaxy. There's a few things I'd like you to clarify before he's approved.

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[*]Ren's age is 42, but his background says he's served for two years since the age of 32, making him 34. 34 seems like the more resonable one here.
[*]Appearance needs more details. Ren seems like a relatively big guy. How does he take advantage of his size? And how does he maneuver in those tight quarters?
[*]I couldn't find MA65 carbine or T-70 pistol in SW databases. Custom equipment is fine, but it'd be better if you change one of these blasters to a canon one, and explain how Ren obtained his custom one. 
[*]How fluent is Ren at Shyriiwook and Dosh? And how did he reach these levels of fluency?
[*]Being a poor ranged fighter is a good balancing weakness. What are the causes of this, though? Perhaps nearsightedness from growing up in poorly lit slums? Maybe his hands get twichy from previous injuries? Or a fear of open spaces from living exclusively in tightly packed areas?
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I'm enjoying what I see so far! Let's see what [@Zoey White] has to say.