[quote=@Zarkun]
[@Gcold] While it's on my mind, the age is eight years after he got promoted. He's turned down a few promotion offers. Should I include that?
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The current version of Scarlet Moons has only been around for six years, which means Ren would have served two years as a private, and four years after as corporal. I would lower his age by four.