[@Yankee]
Well, your character seems ok. I believe that she could be a little bit stronger of you want, but if you like her the way she's, you can go ahead and post her on the CS tab.

[@Cu Chulainn]
Your character is pretty much ok as well. However, reducing that Bravery to B would make more sense in my opinion. Bravery A is something that only a handful of heroes of Heracles' caliber have.

[@SSW]
Your character is basically alright as well. But I have to ask why does he get the benefits of being considered a rightful ruler by his NP of he stole it instead of being given it rightfully?

[@heroic2019]
Your character is ok. You can move her to the CS tab?

[@Duoya]
I don't see anything that wrong in your character. Magecraft powered by the Origin isn't very healthy to use normally, but if you want to, you can go forward with him.