[@Haruharara] I don't see many issues so far. That being said, keep in mind that the setting I'm trying to go for is a mix between the Fallout series & the Steampunk + Dieselpunk genres, so try to figure out why "service frames" would still be made in a post-apocalyptic shit hole. Some ideas could be that there is an automated factory still building them long after the war, or someone repaired a factory and has it up and running again to produce service frames for new investors.

I'd also ask you to note her ammunition, along with how many grenades she has.