[quote=@Gcold] Most of what I need is in place, [@The Fated Fallen]. Just fluff up her profile with some more meat and we're good to go. Here's what you can elaborate on: [list] [*]How does Ashti carry herself? How does she maneuver in combat, and how does she act around her teammates? [*]Did she do anything to deliberately stunt her Force-sensitivity? Hiding her Force-sensitivity during the Battle of Endor, with Luke, Vader and Palpatine around, means she's nearly cut off from the Force. Another topic to explore is how Ashti's connection to the Force changed when she hid in Hutt Space. [*]For outlook and motivation, what's her take on the Rebel Alliance? Does the Rebellion measure up to the old Republic? [*]I assume Ashti learned many of her languages (such as Twiese, Rodian and Umbarese) during her exile? [*]Since she's part of the Alliance's first wave reinforcements to Scarlet Moons, we can say she arrived with Cleo's troops. If Ashti wants, she can get Cleo's referral and start at a higher rank. Otherwise, I can see her settling in as a private to stay anonymous. You can work with [@POOHEAD189] on this part. [/list] [/quote] Alrighty, planned changes: [list] [*]Ashti is friendly, if not outgoing. She's not necessarily the one to start a conversation but will happily join in. As for combat I'd imagine she goes with the mood. Mainly slow and methodical but if she gets an idea in her head she's going for it. Hard to describe in brief, so I'll think of a better way to put this into my CS [*]I'm probably just going to say she didn't fight on Endor. The only ways I can think she might have gotten rid of her force like that is drugs, which I don't really want my character to deal with, or technique, which is also weird to me. It's like saying "She stopped herself from being powerful by being powerful." Once again I'll have a think [*]Definitely worth me thinking about more than I did [*]I originally just put it down to "Learned a lot of languages as a Jedi," but the whole learning languages in exile is a much better angle to work with, will chuck that in my backstory at some point [*]Thanks for the tip! I'll definitely get on that, as long as that's okay with [@POOHEAD189] (I have a sneaking suspicion he's going to be okay with a collab, even if he is a little busy these days.) [/list] All in all thanks for the great feedback! A lot to work with and some really smart suggestions, thanks!