[quote=@Birdboy]
Alright, mind if I put this revised character in character section? 
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The end of your character sheet kind of makes it sound like you're starting out at the very beginning, but you are starting with three Pokemon on your team. So where exactly are we joining your character on his adventure? Is he about to face off against his first gym leader? Are gyms and such even going to be his main focus? 

I'm just providing some things to think about. Most importantly, I want to know WERE (the exact location) your character is starting. You can go ahead and post in the IC section whenever you like.