[quote=@Letter Bee]
[@Shiyonichi], Can you make the images smaller, extend the bios into three paragraphs of five lines each or the equivalent, and correct various spelling and grammar errors?
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I don’t know how to crop an image on my phone I don’t have access to my computer right now. 

The Bios are meant to be updated as time goes by, with Jack I’m keeping everything vague as Jack is supposed to be more played off like an old fashioned anime hero like Vash the stampede, introduced more through his reputation and starting off with a vague past that gets more intricate as the story goes on. Basically I’m trying to invoke the same thing, but making it work for Rp, which is why the origin story is practically non existent to try and keep it streamlined. 

With Reina this is basically because most of the meat in her backstory is in that mystery around her creation and due to the timeline of events there really isn’t any more events that is necessary for her character at this point. 

I’m asking you to make an exception for these characters, as one I literally made with the exact purpose of being played without a backstory going in and the other, has a backstory, I just don’t want to have it on the Bio going in.

As for grammar and spelling, they are not my strong point even on a good day.