No problem!

In regard to Arla noticing what was going on around her, I didn't have a preference tbh. If you're referring to the way Rayth reacted in thinking it was "too soon" that was just because his game plan was to try and warm her up slowly to the circus. He started by telling her that he wasn't human, and then would have added that everyone else wasn't either if she responded well to that. He probably would have avoided the subject of the after party for a while after that though, haha. Of course, things don't always go according to plan, so I personally didn't need the story to go any particular direction there. If we leave it as it is, Rayth would just have to scrap his original idea, which is something he would have been able to do just fine since he's pretty good at thinking on his feet ^^

It's fine! When it comes to minor points in the plot, I don't care too much about how they turn out. I'll usually just play around what my partner does unless the reaction just doesn't make sense for my character. As long as we're on the same page with the big twists, that's the important thing :)