[@conman2163] [h3][sub] OoC [/sub][/h3] 🔸So, for romance… You want to avoid it completely for your character, or just make sure it fades to black sooner rather than later? We just want to be sure we understood this part correctly. 🔸Nice long-term goal. [h3][sub]Personnel files[/sub][/h3] 🔸Nothing to criticize in this section. 🔸Interesting choice to command a Gage. [h3][sub]Appearance[/sub][/h3] 🔸Nothing to criticize about the appearance. [h3][sub] skills [/sub][/h3] 🔸This section could use a short list of sorts of some of his skills. Given his role and long-term plans, we imagine they would delve into ship-related and command-related fields. 🔸Spicing them up with some unrelated stuff wouldn’t hurt either. 🔸How did he fare in comparison to other officer candidates in his “class”? 🔸Is he trained beyond basics at dealing with non-capital vessels? If so, any particular types/models? [h3][sub] Combat Skills [/sub][/h3] 🔸minor element: In addition to the nice paragraph, add a list with skill name + skill level. 🔸Which Sith Lord is he associated with? Might be worth mentioning here. 🔸We presume his weapons training is all standard, rather than dealing with anything unusual? [h3][sub]Specialization[/sub][/h3] 🔸So, he is overqualified for current command. Why is he in that role currently then? Is someone keeping him from advancement? If so, who? 🔸is his ship role focused towards anything in particular? Perhaps to teach him something? [h3][sub] Political Influence and associates[/sub][/h3] 🔸How is he in association with Sith and other imperial naval figures? 🔸Are there any that want to see him held down or rise higher? 🔸 [h3][sub] Rivals and Enemies [/sub][/h3] 🔸who is this officer that forced him down? Is this officer associated with someone in particular (such as a PC Sith? 🔸What sort of “personal differences” led to the demotion? 🔸Was the evidence provided to command true or fabricated? [h3][sub] Other Associates[/sub][/h3] 🔸He has no subordinates he is fond of serving with? 🔸No Sith that has expressed any interest in putting him to use? [h3][sub] Ownerships [/sub][/h3] 🔸no family, no inheritance, etc? [h3][sub] Psychological evaluation [/sub][/h3] 🔸This section feels less Star Wars and more Earth. 🔸We suggest trying to find ways to flavor it more to Star Wars. [indent]🔸While the equivalent no doubt exists, PTSD isn’t a terminology typical to this setting. 🔸While fairly young, he would still have seen a good bit of war action. Perhaps relate it to his handling of such. Perhaps even some atrocity-level events, such as a malicious Sith butchering civilians or being among the survivors of a sound defeat? 🔸his substance-abuses could also use flavoring, as well as considerations on how that is treated by the Navy. 🔸perhaps focus it to one type that is difficult to acquire? [/indent] 🔸Perhaps factor in the second flaw here? (independent-thinking, bordering on insubordination) [h3][sub] Flaws [/sub][/h3] 🔸It would be optimal to separate the different flaws, especially since they are not thoroughly interconnected. 🔸Is his substance-abuse ongoing or stopped (withdrawal)? [h3][sub] Interests [/sub][/h3] 🔸Good interests to spice him up. [h3][sub] successes [/sub][/h3] 🔸If his commanding officer was dead and their ship was alone in the engagement… Who had the authority to give him a field promotion? 🔸Suggestion: [indent]🔸Either he simply took command and had the rank bestowed upon him afterwards 🔸Or there was someone on board (imperial official or Sith) who wasn’t directly in the chain of command but who had authority to at least temporarily assign him the role.[/indent] 🔸What sort of rebel ambush? There is no major rebellion in this era. Certainly not one with significant-enough forces to have fleets with flagships. [h3][sub] Failures [/sub][/h3] 🔸See point above concerning rebellion. [h3][sub] Interview [/sub][/h3] 🔸move the [code][/hider][/code] tag to after the interview. 🔸The names mentioned in here, stick them in appropriate sections earlier in the sheet too.