[@DostHou]Bernard is accepted.

[@veenknight343]Your character sheet is full if misspellings. You get your own character name wrong, its Ayami not Ayame. Some proof reading wouldn't kill you.

Tekada's overall character is fine, a man driven to sorrow by the cruelties he experienced in his life and turned to Toland's writings as a means of dealing with everything. 

However I feel how his son died is a bit nonsensical. Venusian habitats aren't located in space, they're located in Venus's upper atmosphere. So they're still under gravity, they're just above the thick corrosive clouds. If he fell off the colony or through a breach in the habitat, he would have likely just dropped miles to the surface below and died. Having the Martians shoot him thinking he was debris is a bit hard to swallow as well, the Martians are callous but not stupid or needlessly spiteful. 

You need to rework how his son died into something that makes more sense.