[quote=@A Man Is No One] Greetings, A man wishes to not be so formal, but I see an issue that I think we should address publically mainly because I would like to see where everyone stands without having to hunt through the Discord chat. With regards to these collaborations, why are afraid to write for non player characters that other people introduce? More to the point Why should we not just describe the eyes? Sure, Chrononaut might have a specific idea but this is collaborative writing, not just on the etherpad but on the forum in general. Should we not feel free to elaborate where others have left details out? Discuss? [/quote] I agree with this whole heartedly. Elaborating on details won't step on any toes. We can read through and correct as necessary if we take issue with it.