Haha, It is hidden really well. You will probably read right over it ^.^ Another hint, it is hidden because you will read it thinking it is something different then what it actually is. :) Okay, so if she is running towards the dock, or is being dragged towards the water near his boat, would he step in? I was thinking of having a male be sent after her, so when he is trying to drag her back to the water, it would get more attention. How does that sound? Working on two at once? That sounds complicated. lol. What are you wanting to do with Vi? You could always have her talk to Brice, or just assume she continues to watch tv and not say anything about her