[@adorablesaucer]
Great sheet, a bit difficult to read in places, but I only have a few suggestions and I will approve of it.
(1) The faction section needs some general work in regard to finishing up, and generally needs just to look polished.
(2) Because it is hard to read because the information can be a bit all over the place, I'd want you to divide up sections of government into separate paragraphs. (Optional)

I believe, barring anything I may miss and you just need to polish up your faction section and you will be set to go me dude. Welcome.