[@Guy0fV4lor] Your application is judged! Here's your feedback:
[hider=RE: Daedalus]
Much like the incomplete statue form Daedalus has taken, we see potential in your character!

I noticed that you made the portfolio much clearer as to its capabilities as I advised you before, that's good to see. As a small point, there's been observations that talking about multipliers and specifically a century worth of time may be a little too particular -- in practice, the story provides wiggle room either way for the exact parameters of portfolio capabilities, but this isn't much of a problem. More pertinent, though, is that we should mention just as a clarification that the Craftsmanship portfolio probably will not allow discounts when purchasing [i]any[/i] artefact or monument. That said, artefacts or monuments that serve as tools and/or facilities for the act of craftsmanship are fair game as far as we can see. For the latter point especially, it may help to mention such in your portfolio description just to tighten it up.

Now, I warned you that the other GMs are likely going to ask about your immediate plans for your character, and we're in unanimous agreement that the blank-slate persona is conspicuously open-ended. Before we give a proper approval, I'd like you to PM us ([@Cyclone][@BBeast][@Muttonhawk]) on RPGuild with a short run of what you have in mind. Something as simple as where you want to start off nearby in Galbar and the peoples you'd like to try interacting with starting out, followed by speculation on what might happen next, will help us a lot in being confident with Daedalus.

Also, as a passing note, give your CS a quick proof-read for punctuation to make it cleaner ;)

We'll await your response! Daedalus may have a place in Divinus, it just needs a little more detail.[/hider]