[@Cerces22] So far, so good! I do need you to make just a few adjustments though. 

The personality section is lacking just a bit for me. Really try to dig in deep and describe her. Remember that you can do a bullet format list for this section if that ends up being easier. 

In your bio section - can you add how the Kingdom responded to her transition? Did she try to keep it a secret? How did the backlash or support make her feel?