[@Tomaru][quote=@Tomaru] [@Lonewolf685] I love the story of her family [i]technically[/i] is not breaking their vow by pretending their supernatural powers are just an illusion. The shadow ability, though, needs some tweaking. By the sound of it, everything in her shadow is under her control. That's too much. It's fine if it has a disorientating effect on the enemy, or even if you want to choose certain effects, but outright control is a no-go. Stabbing a crossed shadow to inflict damage is cool, though, and that ability is acceptable. Just be warned that she can't go too overboard flaunting her sky-walk in public. If humans start asking questions, the hunters will start asking questions, and that's no good. [/quote] I've reworded it so it's clear she's not puppeting anyone, just tricking their senses with flickering shadows for faux-movement and deeper shadows to misjudge the area around them. The idea of control was something I wanted, but not in the telekinetic sense and more 'I have awareness of what is around me while I deprive you of your confidence. Therefore, I control the situation'. I'd almost added in that she can cut shadows apart to cleave through enemies but figured keeping the theme of blunted scabbards pummeling youkai was more cohesive. That, and leaving room for growth is nice.