[@Zelosse]

Your CS still feels very sparse, just by my standards. Consider telling a story about why they became a Hellmoth, why their flight suit looks the way it does. As things stand, the background just looks very insubstantial.

[@XoXKieroBombXoX]

Your CS looks good to go by my standards, I appreciate including a sample post despite not having asked for it. Wait on Windel and Lmpkio.