Yo Nate. I’ve a few points I want to address regarding your CS. While nothing strictly breaks the rules or setting, there are elements I would like to see you expand on: -A little bit of extra info on NRC would not be amiss. The character sheet is a little Spartan in terms of information in general and, since the character is a robot, it would perhaps make sense to focus less on the unit and more on the manufacturer. Perhaps explaining the acronym would be a fine start ;) -Age and sex on a robot? Age I can at least understand if we count its years of service, although I would vehemently argue that a 24 year old robot is certainly not cutting edge anymore today. Even if he’s been upgraded over that time, I feel like serious concerns could be had over the viability of a company’s robots if they have kept the same basic chassis for almost a quarter of a century. I’m not saying that’s not possible, but they would certainly raise some eyebrows and have to prove themselves against the myriad criticisms and questions from both their customers and rival competitors. -This one’s more of a personal and vague one, and might just be down to the sparseness of information in the sheet, but I wonder in what ways the character would be fun to write. You seem to describe an apathetic drone whose purpose is limited to protecting designated targets. That would make a fine NPC, but you’re choosing this as your main. Am I missing a detail here? And I want to stress I don’t say this in a mean-spirited way; I’m wondering for your sake. I want everyone to have fun in this. Also bear in mind that we do live in a setting where AI is regarded as dangerous and is heavily regulated by the government. That doesn’t mean that companies aren’t necessarily trying to develop that kind of illegal tech anyway and perhaps disguise their efforts to the public, but it’s something to be aware of when deciding how intelligent your android should be. For reference, MRS (Parzivol’s corp) is very much walking that legal tightrope, and probably has a number of secrets in their basement they don’t want Origin to see while A10, his robot character, is smarter than it makes people think it is. -You are free to ignore my last point, but I wanted to briefly address it nonetheless as it is my personal bias: I’ll be honest and say that I feel we may want more human characters than robots right now. But I also felt a bit apprehensive when Parzivol submitted his robots, and he has absolutely sold me on his concept since. Thusly I don’t want to stop anyone from doing the same thing again if it is their wont. Posting this in the thread for ease of reference but if there's any point you want to further discuss, feel free to hit me up on Disco if you want.