[@XoXKieroBombXoX] Good to see your first IC post! It was everything I could have hoped for, and I liked your content a lot. I do have a few pointers. The first is that the color you picked for Black Mage's internal monologue is pretty much illegible. If you must color it, I'd recommend the light blue you used in the sheet, or maybe the yellow of his eyes. In addition, your use of present and preemptive tense is somewhat dissonant from the rest of the RP. I'm not one to force writing styles, but I don't suppose there's any chance you could switch to past tense?