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Not to butt in but a point I would like to bring up is... Why do you keep changing character? I feel like you could of gotten in at this point if you keep with just one concept and refine it into a more workable state. It would be a lot less of a headache for the GM who has to read a fresh sheet whenever you change. As well as a lot less headache for you to have to get a new sheet together every time.