[@Salty Spitoon]
Okay, so few things...

[list][*] Her age is off, have her born in 1998 and it'll be fixed (since currently we are at the very beginning of 2018)
[*] Skills wise, should just be labelled as Self-Defense and Basic Firearms.
[*] Personal style is meant to be a few sentences, not just one. It can be about the different types of clothes they tend to wear, how they do their hair, things like that.
[*] Of course need to finish up with the history section[/list]

That's all! Tagged me once you've finished the CS, we'll be glad to have you!