[quote=@BlueSky44] [@Salty Spitoon] Okay, so few things... [list][*] Her age is off, have her born in 1998 and it'll be fixed (since currently we are at the very beginning of 2018) [*] Skills wise, should just be labelled as Self-Defense and Basic Firearms. [*] Personal style is meant to be a few sentences, not just one. It can be about the different types of clothes they tend to wear, how they do their hair, things like that. [*] Of course need to finish up with the history section[/list] That's all! Tagged me once you've finished the CS, we'll be glad to have you! [/quote] [list][*] if we're in december of 2017, nov 23rd 1999 would mean she had just turned 18 last month. I genuinely hope that doesn't come off rudely, truly not my intention. I might honestly be wrong, I am pretty sick currently. But if you wouldn't mind checking the date again to double check so we're both on the same page I will happily take your recommendation. [*] Will adjust accordingly. :) [*] Ohh! I am terribly sorry. I thought you were going for a little like "sound byte synopsis" of their style. I will fix that once I get back to it to finish the history section! <3 [*] Can't wait! I have all that info kinda cliff-noted in my head currently so once I have the time to sit down and write it up I will. <3 ^-^[/list]