[quote=@BlueSky44] [@Salty Spitoon] Ok, just one thing I can really see... Who is she apprenticed to? It says she's an apprentice to? If you mean that she's still learning to be a sorcerer and still learning magic, just put sorcerer and then in parenthesis or something that she's still learning to make things a little easier to read. Other then that she's good to move over! [/quote] Oh, I was more referencing level of skill than position :P While she has become nearly masterful of what she has learned from her Book she knows (or rather has a strong belief) there is so much more out there that magic can do that she's simply not learned/experienced yet. She has a large understanding of magic and magic-theory though simply hasn't had the opportunity to learn from a Master or Find the books she would need to implement her knowledge of the practice. Her knowledge of Magic primarily resides in Runecrafting and implementation. The book taught her a few spells outside of Runes though minimally in comparison. She has an extreme desire to learn more practical magic. Will adjust accordingly :)