[quote=@LetMeDoStuff] Looks alright mostly, just a few things you will need to add and consider. First off, a request per se. Could it be organised into a hider? Just makes it easier on the scrolling and organisation and all when it gets moved into the character tab. Secondly, I feel like a key part of the biography is missing - Was there any relevance to his family and the nuking of Tokyo? Didn't want this to be too long because he was obviously born afterwards, but perhaps that shaped his childhood? [/quote] Made the required edits!