[@Crusader Lord]Goddamnit, he's a nazi isn't he. As expected of the Gilgamesh expy.

Anyways, I've got two concerns that you can fix rather easily.

First off, I need you to specify what type of weapon his key is. I also need you to not try to stick in a Hammerspace power. Johann can summon items from his vault, but he can not store new items into his vault, only return the items he's fired from it, and only if those items weren't destroyed in the process of being fired. Capiche?

Second off, your sorcery sounds very frickin' powerful for someone who's only got 18 MAG. Angels and Demons can literally be Patrons, y'know? Maybe make his sorcery affect lesser spirits, and make those lesser spirits incapable of casting magic...cause that sounds suspiciously like you're trying to get a Spirit Specialized Gifted perk...

You also have your Tentacle Power placed in two different parts of the CS.

Also, I don't know if Ari wants people to be able to conjure minions without specifically having that Patron Benefit, especially when Psychic has nothing to do with minion creation.

Otherwise I don't hate the idea of having a grandpa to go with Hilaria's grandma.