Thank you for your submission[@Liseran Thistle]. There are a few things that need to be worked on before we can accept this as a viable character. I have included them in a list for you.[list] [*]Short description of looks & style. Picture or physical description is required. [*]Simplified report on known skills and estimated levels. Courier Sheet does not have designation for Force Powers; If you wished to make an unaligned Force User you will need permission from the GMs. No permission was asked for or granted. Does she posses no other abilities that make her job easier? How does she protect herself? How does she negotiate if she lacks the skills? Was she not trained in basic skills one needs to survive? Did she not have a mentor, parents, family to teach her about basic life skills? [*]How does the character move around in the galaxy? Has she never moved? [*]Quick report on favored employers, associates, contacts and rivals. Who are her former employers? [*]Psychological Evaluation of this character is contradictory to the fact that she has no named rivals. She would know who she is sucking up to. She would know who owes her money. [*]Major achievements and failures on record. What kind of ship did she steal? Does she still have it? [*]Personal biography, as detailed by the subject for future record. Acquired shortly after last achievement of note. While this doesn't have to be a play by play for her life some expansion on who, what and how her world was shaped makes for a more playable character. How did she become an employer? What is the name of her establishment? When did she get it? What was it in her life that helped her along that path? Has she been to other planets? What does she smuggle?[/list]