[@Liseran Thistle]
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[*]Skills
Please use the following guide for your skill levels.
https://bit.ly/2UsHJkd
The reason we ask this is because you will have the opportunity to advance those through role play. If however you do not have levels in these skill you will not be able to raise them nor will the character be approved to advance. If you're using a skill against a player without definition the other player has the right to think they're better than you.

[*]Again what is it she is smuggling? Is it limited to something specific? Where does she get the product? Where does she hear about the goods? How does she let people know she has advertise merchandise? You talk about her being her own employer what is the name of her business? When did she get her own business? Wouldn't that be an achievement she'd be proud of? Are her parents still alive?

[*]Why has no one come across her in Nar Shaddaa and snatched her up as a quick 1000 in credits for her bounty? Who placed the bounty? From what I'm seeing you're leaving your self wide open for a bounty hunter to snag. That's your prerogative but I see nothing on this sheet that would explain how she hasn't been found.

[*]Grammatical  errors in the following sentences: 
"The ship wasn't stolen from anyone remarkable or important,it used to belong to a family of merchants who was just unfortunate enough to leave their garage unlocked oe night."
Space after commas.

[*]She's failed at nothing and achieved only one thing in twenty five years? I find this hard to believe with her personality that she wouldn't have a few more here.

[*]This ship seems like a very integral part of the character. Where has she traveled on it? Who does repairs? Does she have a crew? Does she have a specific mechanic?[/list]