How's this? [quote]Long ago, when most races were still in their infancy, there was a war among the gods. Because there were too many gods being killed, Ao, the God of Gods, made it a divine law that any god caught killing another god would be killed themselves. Although they all followed his new command, none were happy about it. They decided to let their races war for them instead. Many of the races that were supposed to be on the same side, however, turned against each other over petty squabbles. Thus, the gods began creating items for their chosen warriors, those that would war in the final battle. With these godly items, the chosen began their bloodbath. Only two warriors remained; Bahamut's chosen and Lloth's. To end the battle and claim victory, Bahamut's warrior sealed Lloth's priestess in a magical box that could only be opened with the Dragon's Fang Key, which was hidden as three pieces. It's been 10,000 years since that battle ended. The Dragon's Fang Key was found and repaired, releasing the priestess, Haelra Baenre, who proceeded to inform the young mage that had freed her about the godly artifacts that had been scattered and hidden, waiting for their chance to shine again.[/quote] Anything you would change or add? Also, Dorgydenth is the name of the gold dragon. Thinking the young dragon or Dragonborn that's in your party is his descendant.