[quote=@tobiax] [@Sedjwick] The character concept is good, however, there are a few issues. Firstly, knowing whether or not Toa exist/have existed for sure isn't that easy to get around. There were no Toa involved in the entire Exodus group, and thus no relics from Toa to exist to be collected. That means the sword by proxy is void. Also, I'd rather have what Kanoka discs he has be clear, as opposed to a "random assortment". In addition, they're larger than his head in diameter and fairly thick, so I think carrying twelve of them would be somewhat difficult. [/quote] Thanks for the feedback. I'll fix some of the stuff soon. However, in my defense on the things regarding the existence of Toa, you never made it clear if anyone was aware of if Toa had existed in the past or not, and I'm pretty sure that, according to the original canon, all Turaga had once been Toa (feel free to correct me if I'm wrong, but you'll have to cite some evidence). Additionally, I never said that the sword did belong to a Toa, I just said that Varana is convinced that it did. There must be some Matoran that believe in the existence of Toa, even if all they have to go by are myths and legends.