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[b]Name: EXP 0502782[/b]

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Before transformation: 24.3 years

After transformation: 0.1 years

Total age: 24.4 years

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[b]Para Category: Alpha | level 4 threat[/b]


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0502782 can cause extreme migraines to one target within eyesight of 0502782. 0502782 can also cause heavy mental trauma (hallucinations, headaches, random/unnecessary pain, fogged eyesight, e.g) to 1-5 targets. It can create horrifying illusion "fields" that make who or whatever is inside these "fields" hallucinate, seeing horrors, monsters, and general human fears within these areas. These areas can only be seen when someone enters them and can range from 3-10 feet in size, and there can only be 2 of these fields active at one time. 0502782 can "phase" through non-physical matter to get from point A to point B in seconds. 0502782 can "teleport" up to 10 feet in a straight direction that is not blocked by physical matter (glass, walls, doors, e.g).
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Once, this creature was a scientist before the explosion. After the event, it had lost all of its memories and skills it had once had as a human.
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0502782 is extremely powerful with its psionic power, but lacks in physical power. It is frail and weak, and can lift no more than 5 kg. It is also slow in movement speed and small, hovering 2 feet off the ground. It is easily hurt and has little to no endurance and armor. Additionally, it can only consume the fear and hate of others minds. If 0502782 cannot receive its food source, its psionic power weakens, and if exposed to gas-form lead, it instantaneously falls unconscious and will not awake until it is removed from the environment and given 5-10 hours to retain consciousness, and if exposed to gas-form iron, its psionic power is disabled entirely until it is removed from the environment. Additionally, mechanical entities/objects (drones, droids, mechs, e.g) are immune to the effects of 0502782's abilities.
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[b]Brief History:[/b]
Once a scientist in the tower. It was Jace Kane. After the blast, he had been thrown out of the tower on the lower levels and into the city. He hid in the sewer system as his painful and gruesome transformation began. After, he had become what he is now. A tall, strange, fleshy horror with odd abilities. It lost all of its memories of what he was before the transformation, believing it was born inside the sewers. When it resurfaced to explore, it was quickly found and caught by enforcement and brought into the tower for testing and containment.

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I fixed it up a bit. Some changes were made and its looking pretty good right now. Is it good, or does it need more improvements?