Thank you for the approval and feedback, [@Jackdaw]. I've made a choice regarding her involvement with the corporation. I have amended my application with a few edits to clarify the corporate situation, as well as a few things I felt needed retouching now that I am out of my initial haze of spellbound writing. If any of my edits changes the previous approval, I am happy to further edit them or otherwise backtrack to the state it was in previously. I understand it is not very cool to do any edits while it is in pending status, so I'm hoping ya'll won't hate me for this.

For the sake of transparency:
Clarified under political influences that her involvement with Val'shan Trading is criminal in nature.
Added a sentence to the associate Rassk about having worked as an independent contractor for the Empire.
Clarified that the Val'shan Trading Initiative is a corporation in associate Lazal Ke's entry.
Added a sentence to 'Villa Lyn' to give a better picture of the nature of her home.
Edited the entry for ownership - Val'shan Trading Initiative. Hopefully it's a little more understandable now.
Rewrote the passage about vehicles to be more clear.