Formatting: I'll make these changes as soon as I have time Appearance: Yup! I plan to have her go through that ICly as some character flavor and an indicator for the passage of time as she grows up! Talents: Great feedback here and that all makes sense, I think I purposefully lowballed how skilled she was because I wasn't sure what the appropriate level of training and control she'd have access to for either of them is. Non-Force skills: Both of these are also sensible, I think I'll be going with Jungle, Desert and Arctic. The bone structure thing also makes sense. Failures: For failures she was s'posed to have touched either a dead body or some medical materials during a healing class and gotten rather traumatized, it also ties into why she was so resistant to learning any healing skills and her failure to learn anything beyond the very basics of first aid would also be listed. Addendum: We like her. Yay!