I discussed my character on Discord and put all changes into it.

Is Renzo in for this RP?


[hider=Renzo Kouken][center][h1][color=a187be]Renzo Kouken[/color][/h1]
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[color=a187be][b]|[u] {Full Name} [/u]|[/b][/color]
[indent]Renzo Kouken[/indent]
[color=a187be][b]|[u] {Age} [/u]|[/b][/color]
[indent]21 years old[/indent]
[color=a187be][b]|[u] {Species} [/u]|[/b][/color]
[indent]Humanoid[/indent]
[color=a187be][b]|[u] {Gender} [/u]|[/b][/color]
[indent]Male[/indent]
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[color=a187be][b]|[u] {Force Sensitive/Alignment} [/u]|[/b][/color]
[indent]Renzo is force sensitive. He is a light Jedi. He is now leaning more to grey, because of his expanding awareness.[/indent]
[color=a187be][b]|[u] {Appearance} [/u]|[/b][/color]
[indent]Renzo is 1.79 metres / 5'10,5 tall. His hair is short, dark brown. He has grey eyes and these radiate a determination of righteousness. He is quite muscular and his body is in a fit condition.
Renzo doesn't like facial hair and he shaves every other day.[/indent]
[color=a187be][b]|[u] {Equipment and Personal Belongings} [/u]|[/b][/color]
[indent]Renzo Kouken wields a lightsaber with a yellow crystal, which he has since he became a Jedi Knight. He wears this saber on his hip, and his second one he wears on his other hip. He wears red, grey and black battle armour from his feet all up to his shoulders and neck. Around his neck he usually wears a dark greyish cape. Ofcourse he wears a pouch wallet for his credits.
In Renzo's travelbag are his clothes, pictures, small snacks and such basic stuff.[/indent]
[color=a187be][b]|[u] {Physical Abilities} [/u]|[/b][/color]
[indent]Renzo has trained under the Argent Council with Jedi knights, padawans and masters. He trained in strengthening his body muscles, improved his physical endurance and agility. Renzo has a strong and muscled body with a great endurance while running or lifting heavy objects.
His agility was less focused on, he is able to dodge and defend against (counter)attacks, but 40/100 he succeed when training with more skilled Jedi. He is still learning to improve his reflexes and battle focus.
His ability to fly a spaceship was learned during the years of his Jedi training by his Jedi Master.[/indent]
[color=a187be][b]|[u] {Force Abilities} [/u]|[/b][/color]
[indent]One of his force abilities is his sensitivity to the truthness in words, he became aware of this as a young child. He was trained on this by his master and had developed this as his main ability as Jedi.
Renzo's thought manipulating skill is still lacking perseverance and willpower, he has not developed this skill adequatel yet.[/indent]
[color=a187be][b]|[u] {Limitations} [/u]|[/b][/color]
[indent]Renzo has a limitation that he could think too fast and forget important details while on a mission.
Renzo is still working to strengthen his connection with the Force, to be in allowance of situations that happen. He is easily willing to control a situation instead of trusting that things are as they are.[/indent]
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[color=a187be][b]|[u] {Personality} [/u]|[/b][/color]
[indent]Renzo is fair, righteous, honest, determined, friendly, hard-working and loves to look at women.[/indent]
[color=a187be][b]|[u] {Place of Origin} [/u]|[/b][/color]
[indent]Renzo was born on a planet in the Outer Rim. He was a baby when his parents moved to another planet in a small spaceship, owned by Renzo's family.[/indent]
[color=a187be][b]|[u] {Background} [/u]|[/b][/color]
[indent]Renzo grew up on a variaty of planets, most situated in the Outer Rim. His parents were traders on the black market. Most planets that he lived on were occupied by the CIS. It was well-known that living under CIS rule wasn't exactly pleasant so Renzo's parents moved many times from planet to planet to avoid being caught trading black market tradegoods, anything that could be made profit of they would buy and sell somewhere else for a higher price.

When Renzo was 10 years old he lived with his family on a small, lightly populated planet in the Outer Rim. There Renzo went to school and he became aware of his parents criminal ways. He was not happy about that, to say the least. He did not agree with them and argued with them alot. From then on Renzo become more aware of his sensitivity to truth and deceit as he watched his parents go their criminal ways that included stealing, scamming and lying to others.
He went on to practice this skill by speaking out what he knew, facing any conscequences that could come. His parents did not like that, because Renzo would speak in public about his parents criminal business. One time his parents almost were caught during their trading because of Renzo's loud mouth. His parents decided to leave the planet soon after that.

Then one day before Renzo would move with his parents, a Jedi Master with the name Zulang Quot arrived at Renzo's school. That master was sent by the Argent Council, it's members had meditated on the recurring idea of looking for new students in the Outer Rim.
Master Zulang had sensed Renzo when they passed by and they both stopped walking. Zulang looked at Renzo for a long time before each one of them spoke a word. The Jedi Master had a gut feeling Renzo could be force sensitive. They talked briefly with eachother and Master Zulang talked about where he came from and what he was sent to do. Renzo felt a weird connection between the both of them. Master Zulang and Renzo agreed that Zulang would meet Renzo's parents.
After school Zulang met Renzo's parents and they had a profound talk about Renzo's possibilities and skills. After this talk it was decided that Renzo would travel with Zulang Quot to become a Jedi Padawan, if his force sensivity was acknowledged by the Argent Council. He said farewell to his parents and hoped he would see them again soon.

The Argent Council had accepted Renzo after a first introduction and a during a subsequent meeting. Renzo was accepted. He had years of training including: physical endurance and agility, saber training with wooden poles, learning about the history and general culture of the Jedi, history of the universe and it's galaxies, The Force, Force abilities (theory), training of his Force Empathy, Force Manipulation and later on he was taught how to wield a lightsaber. When Renzo had completed his training, his training saber was traded in for his own lightsaber with a yellow crystal. He had become a Jedi Knight.

Renzo spent most of his time with his Master Zulang Quot, travelling through space to enrich himself with various cultures and lifestyles to better understand life itself and how the force lives in all things.
Then one day his Jedi Master had to go on a mission to Mandalore. He would look for new a new force sensitive child on Mandalarion. Renzo was asked to join him and learn more about the Mandalore culture and it's way of living.
Renzo had learned how to fly a spaceship during his training, but had mostly been a passenger during most spaceflights. He would now co-pilot a spaceship for the first time.[/indent][/hider]