[center][I][color=7ea7d8]"There was once a prophecy that foretold the coming of a powerfully Force-sensitive being who would restore balance to the Force! The prophecy of the Chosen One was an ancient Jedi legend that was passed through generation after generation........But, what if the legend was told wrong?"[/color][/I][/center] [color=7ea7d8]For years the Jedi had believed in that damned prophecy, due to their insaitable lust for peace the Jedi made mistake after mistake. They watched as a new emperor rose from within, the rise and fall of one of the most powerful Darth's in history. For their mistakes, the Jedi paid dearly and soon enough the order itself fell to darkness. [/color] [hider=Plot] Grey Jedi x Grey Jedi You are a powerful Jedi, your parents were survivors of the devastation that shook the entire universe and left the galaxy without their protectors. You've read all the Jedi codex, you've seen and studied the ruins of the Sith temple on Mustafar. Fed up with all the lies and deceit on both sides you've chosen to follow a new path. You travel the galaxy in search of your own truth's, choosing to help those in need or to fill your own selfish desires all the while avoiding the conflicts that threaten the universe around you. You aren't the typical run of the mill Jedi after all. On one special night whilst communing with the Force at the Sith Temple on Moraband you felt a powerful ripple in the Force, it wasn't the first time you've experienced this. No, throughout the years you've felt this presence growing stronger with each one passing, maturing, but this time it called out to you, it pulled you in. Following the Force you find yourself on the Planet of Tatooine, it wasn't long before your ship was ransacked and a precious treasure was stolen. Unable to leave without it you set out on a search for the thief. But when you find it in the possession of a highly force-sensitive smuggler her power stronger than you’ve ever seen! But, things go from bad to worse. Things go awry when her buyer double-crosses her and the empire rears it's ugly face. Faced with a new challenge and a potential new Ally you're fed up and decide to come out of retirement. Time for some things to change. It was time for a new ruler to take the reigns! This is the story of how you rise to power and bring in the Age of The Grey Jedi![/hider] [hider=Navi] Name: Navi Tavik Race: Twi'lek Age:20 Appearance: [img] https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/7ced2ea0-2ee1-4d29-b94b-9efc8b169085/d71c9g5-7e81ccc9-1217-4f1e-b2a8-63ee8929799d.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJpc3MiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwic3ViIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsImF1ZCI6WyJ1cm46c2VydmljZTpmaWxlLmRvd25sb2FkIl0sIm9iaiI6W1t7InBhdGgiOiIvZi83Y2VkMmVhMC0yZWUxLTRkMjktYjk0Yi05ZWZjOGIxNjkwODUvZDcxYzlnNS03ZTgxY2NjOS0xMjE3LTRmMWUtYjJhOC02M2VlODkyOTc5OWQuanBnIn1dXX0.5w2OQRJshjryGH8CkagEsCcJSEHUhhp5M1b23AK4wgk [/img] [img]https://i.pinimg.com/originals/1d/bd/28/1dbd28906e2e34b37ddce65121c6be43.jpg[/img] [/hider] [hider=Writing Sample]Like most Twi’lek Navi was born on Ryloth and like most Twi’lek her family were slaves. Navi always knew she was different from her brothers and sisters even at a young age. Able to lift small objects around the room as just an infant her mother took special care that her identity remained a family secret; least she lose her child to the tyrannical grips of the empire. But like most uncultivated talents Navi powers grew quickly and wildly, she graduated from small blocks and spoons to tables and chairs even the servant droid in mere years. It wasn’t until Nabrina was five that a spark of what she was truly capable of emerged it’s ugly face. One night her mother was late from her shift working down at the local catina for a skeezball of a boss. All hope was not lost as the young Twi’lek heard the hiss of the pressurized doors open, she ran from her bed to greet her dear mother. Before she could reach the doors she was grabbed by her two older sister, they placed a hand over her mouth. “[b]Empire! They have mom![/b]” her brother whispered. A bloodied and beaten Twi’lek woman was thrown to the ground as two men clad in all black shiny armor hovered over her weapons at the ready. A man walked in behind them, hands clasped behind his back. “[i]This rotten dust ball, to be sent here is a great disservice so if you will please cooperate me and my constituents will be on our way[/i]” he spoke gently as he swept his finger across the top of the fireplace. “I swear! I’ve no more girls you've taken them all!“ her mom pleaded as she scrambled to touch the hem of the admirals pant leg. The Admiral sighed in annoyance as a soldier rushed over kicking the woman across the face. "[I]That may be but my sources tell me otherwise. He has taken quite the liking to these rumors.[/I]" he turned on his heel to face the woman. “[i]Search this rundown shack and bring me every girl you find![/i]” he barked. Three more troopers dressed the same marched in and began ransacking their home. “You three hide, protect each oth-“ her brothers words were cut short as the curtains flung open and they were blinded by the flashlights on their rifles “They’re here! Found em, Found em!” The trooper yelled out. Before she knew it her family was hoisted from their rooms and forced to their knees in a line in front of the Admiral. “P-please no!!! Don’t take my children please!!! I’ll work harder I swear it!!” their mom pleaded with tears and blood dripping down her face. Her children watch on, Navi’s brother struggled to break free “[b]Let go! I’ll rip your goddamn heads off!!![/b]” he hollered. The man before them simply chuckled “What a spry young man, he would’ve made an excellent soldier” he said as he walked up to his be of his men and took his blaster pistol. “Sadly for you lot we aren’t here to take captives. He's only interested in one girl. The rest of you filthy rags are no longer needed.” He explained. “[i]Whatever you want I’ll do it, I’ll pay for it I’ll work harder!! Anything but please don’t hurt my babies![/i]” their mom begged. Scared, Navi tried to walk to her mom, “Mama?” Was all she was able to mutter out. Her mom rushed over and hugged Navi tightly “[i] Shhhh, bug it’ll be alright[/i]” she whispered. The man laughed once again but louder, their mom kept petting Navi and smiling wide “[i] It’s alright mommy will handle it, okay my sweet girl it’s alri-“[/i] the sound of a blaster going off cut her words short. It happened so fast the young girl couldn’t believe what just took place. One moment her mothers smiling face was all she could focus on, the next blood splattered in her eyes as her mother was shot in the head. All of her brothers and sisters screamed loudly, Navi was lost for words and expressions. Shakily she reached out to her mothers corpse “M-mama?....Mama?” Her voice broke as tears welled in her eyes. Her brother screamed in agony, mustering up the strength to break free and rush at the killer. The admiral smiled as his sights set on the boy, he pulled the trigger again placing a bullet into the teens stomach, but in his rage it only slowed his advance. He trudged on until her reached the man grabbing at his collar. Again the sound of a blaster rang out as another shot pierced the boys chest. As her brother fell to his knees his grip didn’t falter the rage in his eyes spoke volumes, the admiral however was smug as he brushed the boys hands away and placing a hand on his shoulder to steady him. The man raised the blaster to his head before firing off another round dropping him to the floor. Her sisters screamed and held one another. The admiral chuckled as he walked over to the them and examined them all. His eyes widened and he came to Navi “[b]A white skinned Twi’lek? My my aren’t you the rare specimen?[/b]” he said as he handed the blaster back to his man. “[b]Take the girl, kill the rest![/b]” he commanded. Navi was in a state of shock, first her mother now her brother. Th-this couldn’t be happening, this all had to be some terrible dream! But as her hands touched the cold flesh of her mother something within her snapped and a beast was awoken. The soldiers nodded and grabbed her two sisters, their screams broke the young girl from her trance. A soldier walked up to her “[b] Alright let’s go[/b]” he ordered Navi simply stared at him. Her breath became ragged as she began to hyperventilate, the soldier raised his gun “[b]I said move![/b]” he barked. He reached out to grab her but stopped as a strange feeling overcame him. He shook free of it at first but then like a wave it washed over him again even stronger. The man stood straight and raised his gun to his fellow man. “The hell are you doing!” One said. “Drop it two-nine” another warned. “It’s not me I swear!!!” He screamed out before firing off his shotgun blasting his ally in the chest. The admiral slowly turned around to witness the events “The girl!” He said pointing at Navi. All guns were cocked and trained on the child but staring at the Admiral rage boiled up within and without blinking in an instant every blaster shot from their owners palms and to the feet of the Twi’lek. “Damn you!” A soldier snarled and rushed her from behind but stopped dead in his tracks. “What are you fools waiting for! Shoot her! Shoot her dead!” He exclaimed drawing his own weapon. “I-I can’t move sir!” One man grunted out “Me either, she has me!” Another exclaimed. Navi reaches out and the pistol flung from the Admirals grasp, clutching her hand slowly the blaster crumpled in midair like paper before dropping to the floor. The girl then tilted her head and every soldier in the room stood at attention with their arms stretched wide. Raising her hands slowly she began to levitate all of them at the same time. They began choking and gasping for air and as the room began to fill with the sounds of bones breaking and popping from their sockets Navi’s eyes never left the Admirals. The men cried loudly as their armor crumpled and their flesh torn. Then, with a mere flick of her wrist the girl snapped all of their necks simultaneously silencing them. Their bodies dropped to the ground with sickening thuds. The admiral fell to the ground in awe of what happened, her sisters looked on in silence and horror. As Navi looked around at the bodies of her brother and mother an overwhelming sadness took hold, her knees went weak and with a breath she let out a bloodcurdling scream of pure anguish. “Nooooooooooooo!!!!!!” The girl yelled. The room, no the house shook terribly, the walls cracked and crumbled, debris, books and chairs flung themselves around the room, before the ceiling was torn down on top of them all. In all of her pain the only thing the Navi could focus on was her mothers smiling face. When she awoke, she didn't know if days, weeks or months had passed. She found herself alone on Tattoine in a hutt filled with a band of smugglers. Her sisters and that man were nowhere to be found for now at least. Sitting up in the dark she quickly understood her predicament and vowed to not only find her sisters one day but her mothers killer as well.[/hider] [Hider=Preface] As you can see this is not your typical Star Wars story, for this story I’m looking for a very open minded fan, someone who can help me take the best parts of The force unleashed,SWTOR, Canon stories, The fallen order etc and blur those lines to make a story all of our own. Star Wars is a huge expansion with a multitude of stories happening simultaneously. My partner for this must be able to sit with me and come up with a brand new story that’ll shake the galaxy![/hider] [Hider=Rules] [center][color=f49ac2]I tend to not have many rules as I don’t want to restrict my partners creativity! But there are a few things that you must abide by! -THIS IS A MATURE RP. Now I know we are all use to the pg-13 elements of Star Wars they have on tv/movies, but, I wish to follow a more mature theme of what you’ll find in the comics. I’m talking dismemberment from lightsaber wounds, gore, sex, drugs etc! Some of the planets in Star Wars are very dark and cut throat and I want to explore them all! For this you must be over 18! No exceptions, It will also take place in PM. -There will be romance, it won’t be the main focus but I’d love to explore it! With you being my new teacher, us going on hair raising adventures with very high stakes I think it’s fair to say feelings will develop. Also I do not fade to black. -Choose who you want to be! Remember you are a grey! You walk the balance between light and dark. But you are still mortal and fall prey to temptations. Should you want to lean more on the dark side than the light so be it!! The beauty of this RP is where we will finally end, will this new power be worse than the Sith or better than the Jedi! Create the Jedi of your DREAMS! Heck you want to wield both a lightsaber and a blaster pistol? Go for it! We can choose! -Go above the norm! We are all used to the simple force push or mind tricks but what if we went further!? This is a new age of force users stronger than our predecessors! Don't just force push people a few feet away, punch a hole in the hull of a destroyer! Rip the doors off the hinges and crumble entire buildings! Mind tricks turning the victims brains to mush! Let’s go above what we know about the force! -Don’t allow just me to dictate this story! Contribute to it! Have a twist you think I may like throw it in! A sudden wrench thrown in our path? Toss away! Let me see that amazing writers talent you have stashed away! -Finally absolutely no one liners! Please see my writing sample on what I would like from my partners! However you do not need to write that much! I'm very big on situational writing. If you are establishing a scene the more the better, if its a one on one interaction between characters I don't mind a 2 paragraph response. Quality over Quantity! -Respond in a PM with your favorite saber color. May the Force Be With You![/color][/center][/hider]