[quote=@MissCapnCrunch] [i][@Yankee] [i]Hi Yankee! Reading through your CS I thought it was very well done! I like how you incorporated BigCo into your background and I like that you're the dr who isn't really a doctor! As far as I'm concerned everything looks good, and I considered Xavier accepted! I will edit in the information to reflect that as soon as possible.[/i] [@PrinceAlexus] Hey, looking through your cs- Would like to have some of the grammar fixed if possible ie: spelling. capitalization etc. Also, would you be playing your sister as well or is it more of an NPC counterpart? If just an NPC counterpart that is fine, if not I will need you to make another CS for her. If those things are fixed, should be good! [/i] [/quote] NPC probbly. I may expand her if things change and add her in. Sure i can run it via a more advanced method than my phone when I can raise the potato laptop from starchy sleep.