[quote=@Sosuke] I'm surprised... If possible I can convert 'stolen parameters' to 'stolen magical energy', a very minor amount. As Od is the currency which the Master's wage war. I'd be willing to discuss if that was the only critique about the sheet. As for Hatshepsut, there are only a handful of Female Pharaoh, so that is a big clue. I'd rather her disguise only burn away when using the charge attack for sake of fairness. As for the 'presence concealment', it does drop when the beast attacks... It can only be cloaked when out of combat or not moving to attack, that's my intention. [/quote] I could elaborate more on the reasons, why I prefer the 2nd idea over the second. But, on a second look, that Unified Language ability is most certainly going to cause disputes in the RP. All of the other Servants applied so far would fall on the category of Early AD to Contemporary (except maybe Arthur and Altera since they are from the 5th Century) making them be affected endlessly by this ability. Which wouldn't be interesting to anyone, to say the least. I'd prefer if you don't use the whole idea at all. Regarding the second point, gender is not a reliable indicator of anyone's True Name in Fate. Also, you said the same thing as I; revealing her True Name when she calls her Noble Phantasm's name for the charge attack, so I guess there's no problem there. [@Flood] She's accepted.