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[url=https://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/180496-soul-eater-the-kishin-hunt/ooc?page=2#post-5034073]Here she is![/url] She is done! Still need a partner though.
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I definitely think you have a solid foundation here; however, I feel some quintessential details are lacking that make it feel a bit incomplete. [list]
[*]The personality is a bit underdeveloped for my liking. It feels like almost too shallow of a view into Jackie, not really showing that much about her personality beyond surface appearances. If you could expand on that a bit that would be great. 
[*]I think the backstory could use a little elaboration. As we see in the news and such, celebrity children, especially to rock-star singer,s often have a lot of what could be called "psychological trauma" in many ways, lol. I feel like that's improperly developed, instead just being "Jackie likes music." 
[*]I do think the scene with the monster is underdeveloped as well. There's not a clear explanation as to how a monster came to Death City undetected and decided to attack spontaneously, and how a Meister just happened to be there to save the day. Elaboration there would be nice as well.
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Overall, it's a great start and a likeable character, and I think if it were fleshed out a little more, it would be a great addition to the crew. :)