[quote=@blackdragon] [hider=Undead Witch] Name: Rachel Bromberg Age: 531 Date of Birth: August 5, 1489 Gender: Female Where are you from: Ember Grove, by way of Madrid, Spain Height: Five foot six Weight: 160 lbs Hair color: Red Hair length: Shoulder Skin Color: Extremely Pale Eye color: Sea green Sexuality: Straight Relationship status: Single Siblings: None Parents: Long dead Pets: Her familiar, a black cat named Schrodinger Openness to friends: 10 Openness to romance: 6 Likes: Magic, cooking, reading Dislikes: Rain, technology, being alone Hobbies: Magical theory, cooking, painting Skills: Immense magical knowledge, good connections, little wasted energy with spells. Personality: Rachel struggles with the darkness she has let into her soul on a daily basis, but she still tries to be a good person. Her coven's rules state that there is nothing inherently evil in learning about dark magic, and in certain situations, even its use is acceptable. However, she is a pacifist, having seen far too much violence in her many centuries to resort to violence except to save lives. History: Madrid in the fifteenth century was a pretty bustling place, and Rachel's parents were influential members of the local Jewish community. Her father ran a small bank- since Judaism had no laws against charging interest, they were pretty much the only people who did so- and her mother worked in a bakery. At the age of ten, Rachel learned she had magic, but kept it hidden, for fear that people would find out. And it was a good thing too, for the Inquisition soon came into being. And before you ask, she did expect them. She just wasn't able to put her plans into action before she got caught. She was charged with summoning demons and cursing her neighbors, and while that particular charge was false, admitting to consorting with the dead would be a poor defense so she stayed silent. Her guilty verdict was assured either way. The night before she was to be burned at the stake, Rachel asked for a hood so she could at least not have to see the flames coming for her. The executioner granted her this request, and Rachel made one last gasp attempt to save herself. The ritual was still half-theory, but it worked, and she managed to transfer her soul into the hood. There was nothing she could do to stop the burning, though, and she was put to the torch. For most people, that was the end of the matter, but there was one little detail they didn't know... It took three agonizing months for Rachel to reform from her own ashes like a phoenix, but reform she did. She was able to sense and track down the hood, blackened but undestroyed, and started a nomadic life. Living in the same place for twenty years without aging a day tends to attract attention, after all. Nowadays, she lives in Ember Grove, owning a small Mediterranean restaurant called La Perra Roja. Coven: Leader of the Children of the Black Moon Skill Level: Advanced [/hider] [/quote] Hello ! I have some criticisms personally. FunnyGuy will give you his two cents too. [color=a187be][b]1) I'd like if you could beef up the personality more. 2) I do not believe we made it possible to transfer your soul into an object and to reform from ashes from the dead and without the help of other witches. It seems overpowered to me. 3) Would you mind filling out a form for your coven so people can join it?[/b][/color] [quote=@Raistlin Majere] [@princess][@FunnyGuy] I'm considering joining the game with a werewolf character and had a few questions. [u]Weaknesses[/u] 1. Silver - It's easy to assume that you're referring to be shot with silver bullets, cut/slashed/pierced with silver blades, and probably injected with liquified silver. [i]But, does touching silver have an effect on lycans? Could a wolf touch or hold a piece of silver without feeling ill (such as when Superman is near kryptonite) or feeling pain or being burned?[/i] 2. Chemical W - [i]Does this chemical have an odor? Is it a gas or liquid, or can it be both?[/i] [u]Packs[/u] 3. [i]If we do intend to have our PCs to belong to a pack does said pack have to include other PCs? Or can it be a completely NPC pack?[/i] [/quote] [color=a187be][b]1. Silver is burning to the touch of werewolves. 2. Chemical W is odorless and it is a liquid normally. It could be converted into a gas like most liquids. 3. You can have NPCs but I'd like to try to get at least one PC in each group for the sake of your entertainment. NPCs are expected to exist often. [/b][/color]