[quote]Name: Ni'ra Ta'alhina[/quote] Easy enough name to say. >_>

[quote]Bloodline: Basilisk[/quote] Technically she's a Dragonkin or in this case a Basiliskin. 

[quote]Group: none[/quote] About right.

[quote]Appearance:[/quote] This is a good image. But a bit of info like her height and weight would be really useful. 

[quote]Personality:[/quote] While I do understand why she's not traditionally educated she would receive knowledge from the Basilisks that's invaluable in many ways. They have lived hundreds of years and she would be surrounded by their kind. She would receive the same education as other upcoming Basilisks. The part about her wondering why other descendants like her don't exist is cute but not likely. She would be taught to hate descendants and see herself as a wild Basilisk. The fact that she's different would be used to make her feel even more of a desire to be accepted as a Basilisk. It is possible she doesn't question it much though and is still overly curious. 

[quote]Abilities:[/quote] If we are going strictly off of what was naturally given to her. Being able to control others through a bite is not something a Basilisk can do naturally. Most of the time it is simple petrification. Undoing the petrification isn't natural either, it would need a cure. Likely using the venom yes, but a concocted potion none the less. Her temporary petrification breathe will be permanent if the victims entire body is covered in the stone. Same goes for her poison bite. She won't be able to turn into a full Basilisk, not without a spell. Also Basilisks usually don't have descendant forms themselves.

[quote]Equipment:[/quote] Let me guess. She stole these? Or got them from dead wanderers entering too close to the Basilisk home. Also how does she know how to use them? It should tell me this in her experiences.

[quote]Background:[/quote] It lacks the same information as the "Experience" I requested in making a CS. While it does say briefly her history it doesn't tell me how old she is and what she specifically knows or has done that will be relevant to her current knowledge. She learned how to hunt but from Basilisks she wouldn't be hunting the same way. Likely she would be told to mostly fend for herself at a certain age, then she will have to use what tactics she learned from Basilisks and make it work for her. Expand on this.

For now it's not acceptable. Follow the format I setup on the front page and address the points I made. It's coming though.