[@Hank] Morgan is fukken great. He is accepted after you clear something up. It's somewhat confusing to me on why, after he was saved by a Witcher and given the opportunity to become one, he believes it's a good thing that Witchers are dying out, and that he wishes he could have lived a normal life rather than be a Witcher. Isn't the fact that his family was brutally killed the reason he couldn't live a normal life, and that vengeance/prevention of further butchering worth the Witcher trials as well? [@RedVII] Not a bad character. Though I think you should add certain locations on where he grew up in his backstory, and fill in the blanks a bit. You don't need to tell me about every day, but we can't skip 10-20 years by saying he simply grew up with his mother. Also, I suggest you give him a gambeson or some light mail, but that's just me. If you want him to wear cloth it's up to you. [@Stormflyx] Accepted. The only problem I see in your sheet is that you wrote 'Telempathy' rather than Telepathy on the top of your skill list. [@NuttsnBolts] Audhilde is great. But we'll need to add some more details to her backstory. I only want to know some more facts. Don't fret too much over writing. But give us some facts on what might come up in conversation. Parents, town she lived in, first (if any) lover, etc. Also, please turn "Audhild is an early twenties woman" into "Audhilde is a woman in her early twenties." [@NecroKnight] If your character is a lecturer at Oxenfurt, how is she allowed to wander the Northern Kingdoms? A fair amount of her history works, but it's only bits and piece to a longer story, and how is it she travels around the countryside alone, with no armor or weapons in a world where there's monsters and bandits aplenty? I'll be frank, there is nothing entirely wrong with your character other than a few little bits, but she seems more suited for a casual roleplay. And that's not an insult, I'm talking about her general style.