[@ReedeThe23rd] Right, so first off, whilst I like Wolfram's CS and the unique take on his being far more strategic than directly combative, I would note that as a Primarch, he is nonetheless one of the most effective combatants in the galaxy, if not on par with most of his siblings in that regard. I also somewhat feel that his Meeting, whilst the emotion comes through well, nonetheless feels like a reiteration of the events in his biography rather than seeing things from his perspective, most notably the lack of actual speech between the two. I'd like to see how he talks in the moment, any particular considerations he makes whilst interacting with people and specifically the Emperor, that sort of thing. Regarding the Legion CS, it looks pretty good, especially the discussion that's gone into about the General Staff. I will note, however, that it's very unlikely Bethar could be uplifted to become a Space Marine if he were already an adult, though having him be modified Luther-style to keep up with Space Marines physically would be reasonable. I might also ask for a little more elaboration on their ideology, such as cultural practices and whatnot, and whilst I'm not necessarily opposed to the standard Astartes in the Imperial Star League being nine feet tall on average, I'd like a more in-depth explanation of why this is when other Astartes are, by default, eight feet in height. On the whole, it all seems reasonable, save the changes mentioned above and maybe a few SPAG tweaks that you mentioned wanting to make earlier. I'll look it over again when those are all made. [@Lady Selune] Iniephor is an interesting chap. I do like, in particular, how he has horns on his head, since so far few other Primarchs have had any physical mutations like that; his dislike of power armour in general is quite a rare thing, too, and perhaps something to be expanded upon, e.g. trusting in his psychic power to protect him in a fight moreso than any physical armour. The Meeting is very well-worded, and certainly has a good deal of information surrounding it, though I'd suggest extending it a little further than it has been so far, just to get to the point where Iniephor agrees to join the Imperium proper. Legion-wise, I like the concept of the Lantern Bearers, especially the warcries. I might clarify that not *all* of their Marines are psykers, but otherwise, it's looking to be a good start to things. Knowing that you have more stuff to add, I'm looking forward to seeing how Primarch and Legion both develop.