[@Nate1008] No worries :) [@Ever Faithful] Roger roger. I've added you to the waiting list so hold off with adding your sheet to the characters section for now. [@The Wyrm] Lemme start off by saying I like your high elves. Having them centered around magic is pretty much what I envision high elves actually being in this world. Though I wonder, perhaps you could be a bit more original about your moonwells? Worshipping or revering the sun and moon is all well and good (no pun intended) but moonwell is basicly a rip straight from warcraft, is it not? Other than that I don't have any gripes with it. As for their history... Are they [i]aliens[/i]? I'd be fine if their own creation myth of how they themselves came to be was some sort of tale of how they were seeded upon the world by the cosmos itself, but having access to interdimensional portals is a tad too powerful. I do love their goal of putting the moon back together and collecting the moonshards/lunarite, but the issue is that if they are a force sent from the cosmos then, by that logic, if they were ever in trouble they could just call for reinforcements through another portal. The idea of the setting is that everyone are [i]strangers[/i] and mostly lost in this new land, a continent no one has heard of or seen before. They would be stranded. Do you understand or am I rambling? Also no problem about the dark trolls. A lil' genocide is common in these games. Question though, are the moonwells constructed sites or just places of power? If it is a place of power I'd suggest we make it a lake that a piece of lunarite fell into and empowered the place, thus the name "moonwell". Would also explain how the dark trolls found it and all that. But that assumes no one [i]created[/i] the moonwell. Anyway that's my feedback. If you need to bounce ideas I'm in discord, or you can type out your reply here. Also [@Cyclone] usually has many good ideas, you can ask him too if you need help with how to change things. [b]EDIT:[/b] Oh and one more thing! Haha! The climate of the north-eastern island is not temperate. It's a cold place. Think of northern scandinavia rather than central europe. You can still live there no problem, it's just a colder place. Also dark trolls may be replaced by frost trolls in that case?