[quote=@Chenzor][@The Wyrm] Lemme start off by saying I like your high elves. Having them centered around magic is pretty much what I envision high elves actually being in this world. Though I wonder, perhaps you could be a bit more original about your moonwells? Worshipping or revering the sun and moon is all well and good (no pun intended) but moonwell is basicly a rip straight from warcraft, is it not? Other than that I don't have any gripes with it. 

As for their history... Are they [i]aliens[/i]? I'd be fine if their own creation myth of how they themselves came to be was some sort of tale of how they were seeded upon the world by the cosmos itself, but having access to interdimensional portals is a tad too powerful. I do love their goal of putting the moon back together and collecting the moonshards/lunarite, but the issue is that if they are a force sent from the cosmos then, by that logic, if they were ever in trouble they could just call for reinforcements through another portal.

The idea of the setting is that everyone are [i]strangers[/i] and mostly lost in this new land, a continent no one has heard of or seen before. They would be stranded. Do you understand or am I rambling? 

Also no problem about the dark trolls. A lil' genocide is common in these games. Question though, are the moonwells constructed sites or just places of power? If it is a place of power I'd suggest we make it a lake that a piece of lunarite fell into and empowered the place, thus the name "moonwell". Would also explain how the dark trolls found it and all that. But that assumes no one [i]created[/i] the moonwell.

Anyway that's my feedback. If you need to bounce ideas I'm in discord, or you can type out your reply here.

Also [@Cyclone] usually has many good ideas, you can ask him too if you need help with how to change things.

[b]EDIT:[/b] Oh and one more thing! Haha!
The climate of the north-eastern island is not temperate. It's a cold place. Think of northern scandinavia rather than central europe. You can still live there no problem, it's just a colder place. Also dark trolls may be replaced by frost trolls in that case?
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Hmmm, okay. Here are my fixes to all of those wee problems you just mentioned.

1. The moon falls from sky in shards, smashes into the earth. I assumed, that like meteors, they probably created, well, craters. Those craters would like fill with water, thus making moonpools, or moonwells. I am familiar with the concept from WoW but the only thing they have in common here is the name and not origin story? Their size would of course range from small little bathing sites, similar to WoW, up to, and including, lakes. It seems I did not articulate that well enough!

2. Good point. May I suggest the following? This contingent came through the portal which has since become unstable due to the continued shifting of the cosmos and they can no longer make contact with home or travel back? This might actually not be unusual for the Elves and they perhaps expected it? That makes them new to the world and certainly unable to get any reinforcements, unless, maybe, down the road they do reassemble the moon, or at least enough to stabilize things and go home.

3. I only picked the Dark Trolls since they're the most magically atuned and thus the most likely to be found around the shards. If I picked that wrong, no issue. Ultimately I would like the Rhaetians to have arrived at the site of the largest remaining shard, so feel free to tell me where that is and I'll make it happen.