Looking good, [@Spoopy Scary]. Mary's gonna be a bright beacon of goodness for our pack of cynics. The sheet's great. I really appreciate the details you've included for Mary's appearance and personality. Her background is a very solid exploration on devotion and morality, and I can already see Mary having rich interactions with our existing characters.

I have just three nitpicks for you:

- Which attribute is major and which is minor?
- The king of Jehanna in FoC is a Nord called Frithjolf Broken-Shield.
- Ephesus would be a county under the Duchy of Evermore, instead of its own kingdom.

That's all from me, but since [@Frizan] will be the co-GM for our upcoming mini-chapter, he may have some more feedback for you.