Ok, sorry for the delay everyone ^^; Anyway... [@Sinsystems] I like it, although yeah the "healing cutting" thing needs clearing up. Am I right in thinking you're referring to magically enhanced surgery? Once that detail is clarified, consider the CS accepted. [@Suneli] Ah, sorry if I intimidated you yesterday! For the most part it looks good, it's just that yeah, you seem to be a little worried about making your character overpowered, and underpowering her instead. I'd personally relax some of the restrictions on The Hanged Man, especially as she isn't guaranteed to get it at any one time. Very creative though, and I like the personality changes as a side effect of her powers. [@Mistress Dizzy] Yep, that suggestion seems like a good one to go with. Considering things weren't at all easy for black people in the 1800s, a servant background would be likely. As for the magic, got to say you need to elaborate on it. The versatility looks good though, and I'm interested in seeing more details. [@Killy] Once you write the personality section, your character seems fun, especially with the bug magic! That's pretty unique. [@Vega7285] Hehe, classic light and dark, lawful good and chaotic good duo. I'd recommend having them both as foils, although it's understandable if you only want to go with one. You'd always be able to bring the other in later. [@Majoras End] Yup, vampire concept looks good so far! Let us know when the CS is complete. ... Whew! That's way more characters than we expected. It's probably time to close applications, and start the RP soon.