[@Sanity43217]

It looks good, but I have a few questions. 

- Why made Jaed doubt the Emperor's motives? Was it a specific event or situation? A conflict with his Jedi training?

- When the Empire fell, why did Jaed decide to join the Black Sun rather than going back to the New Jedi Order or even the New Republic?

Also, could you go a bit into depth regarding his Force abilities and experience?