[@VitaVitaAR] My gratitudes for the review. The mana thing was a meme that would've been epic but I'm not too sad to concede it. And hold on... I'm getting a call from the CEO of social inequality in the hypothetical canon of yet to be accepted backstories. He says that slavery is no more! I have already made these changes in the initial post. [s]However, I draw the line at the ban on shirtlessness and I would like to plead my case. The very essence of my character has been crafted upon the foundation that is the absence of a shirt. I refuse to believe that platemail would provide any more protection when he already has abs of steel to stand in the path of incoming blows...[/s] Just got a call from the CEO of making objects beyond their budget appear out of no where for characters who do not have alot of money. He says that [url=https://i.imgur.com/ep2VUZA.png]Rex can have metal stuff.[/url] But that doesn't mean he's wearing a shirt* outside of combat. Provided this is enough to pass the bar for rank 4, I will make these changes. ok now please accept me. edit: *unless someone politely asks him to IC in which case he most certainly will.