[@Framing A Moose] Next round of feedback - 

-For the dementor, it's a good idea but I think amp it up a bit. Like maybe she got really hurt from this or her brother threatened her or something?
-For the broom, instead of having top of the line speed, why not go for stability? Since she's a beater, so being able to not be knocked off course and all is more important than being quick. She strikes me more as a rugged person, so I think a rugged broom would be better.