[@Natsu]

Ok buddy, few things of note here.

-The name at the top needs to be spaced out. L I K E  T H I S. Just so it fits in with everyone else's
-Typical outfit I would like to see you elaborate more. Two paragraphs, please. Doesn't need to be fully in-depth, but I would like a little more detail.
-Boggart. I get why she doesn't like fire, but elaborate more. What's on fire that she sees? Is it just any old flame? How does she get through the long winters without a fireplace? Make it fit in with your Dementor bit, if you want.
-Can you tell me what you meant by Corporeal Patronus? Is it that she is able to produce one? If so, you can just put Able To Produce A Patronus, but if not, please tell me what that means.
-Also for Talents, Possessions, and Dormitory, you just need to delete the instructions bit.

Apart from that, just get the FC's up when you can and you're golden! :)