[quote=@Raineh Daze] [@Derg2] So without the slavery, it's more... tonal things? Like it's just plain [i]off[/i] to take what is a shorter than human race, apply malnourishment, apply only being 16 and a guy, and come out with a 6'5 wall of muscle. Something here doesn't add up. Apart from that, if he's a Hundi dead set on following traditions, it [i]might[/i] be advisable if the journey was actually concluded by the time he reached Estival. Weird engagements would otherwise be a risk. Though that could still be a thing in play, it's worth acknowledging. Also, given the sheer number of people who have already posted a bio or expressed interest (here and in PMs), I think it's best if the roleplay stops accepting [i]more[/i] people who have yet to say anything, at least until it's started and the stable player base is clear. [/quote] In light of the recent issues with following setting, I think it's best I [s]knock[/s] move him up to 18 and call his journey done. I'll say he went to estival, and decided adventuring was dope or something and stayed there. Malnourishment wasn't an issue in the backstory. Between meals at the orphanage and food bought from working (which rex didn't have to share because orphans are mean) I imagine he ate quite well. Generally, the idea started off as "turbo big dog man" so I kinda want to stick with that if anything. I mean, what's life (or fantasy rp) without a couple outliers ;). If you have any suggestions as to make this tonally better please lmk otherwise I'll probably scrap Rex and try for another character. I made a post earlier but it kinda got swallowed. One of the first post's qualms was with the shirtless wooden sword thing being too weak for rank 4. This saddens me greatly, but I conceded that I would let him wear some armor and have a better sword. Say leather armor and a bronze sword. Would this satisfy the requirements for rank 4?